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Thursday, November 17, 2011

Defeat Definition

Defeat, is the pain between my ribs
Wearing nothing but words from your lips
Leaving me with a limp in my steps.
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5 comments:

  1. FahadNovember 17, 2011 at 11:08 AM

    Dear A Smile After the Rain, I like the way that you defined Defeat. I like the rhyme as well. You are a talented poet ;)

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  2. Ruth SchowalterNovember 18, 2011 at 5:55 AM

    Dear Smile After the Rain, how vibrant you make the idea of defeat...I see you walking defeatedly because of something someone said. OH! Is this poem based on a real experience? Have you experienced "pain between my ribs"?

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  3. A Smile After the RainNovember 20, 2011 at 4:12 AM

    dear Fahad thank you so much for your support and i am so glad that you liked my poam "your words are like a beam of light ... that will show me what is wrong and right"

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  4. A Smile After the RainNovember 20, 2011 at 4:21 AM

    Dear Hallelujah Truth, your words made my poem so beautiful that i don't recognize it any more. Thanks for your elegant words.
    the pain between my ribs comes from two words:
    Good Bye

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  5. Ruth SchowalterNovember 21, 2011 at 7:05 AM

    I am smiling!

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